Thursday, October 2, 2014

Too, to and two

For http://www.octpowrimo.com/2014/10/octpowrimo-day-2-today-is-more-than.html challenge day 2

I too used to have a heart
To which i used to cling,

And then came the man
who stole my dream.

Two days and two nights
I stayed wide awake,

So I thought may be
I could bake a cake,

Then I found that the man too
Loved to eat and drink.

A chili chocolate it was
A mess it made in the sink.

Through his stomach
I stole his heart

In exchange of mine
Now I can say  'I am fine'

Thought of writing a funny poem this time. 

9 comments:

Julie Jordan Scott said...

It worked! I love starting my day with a chuckle and making that chuckle poetically based? Even better.

Wait, is this heaven?
No, its OctPoWriMo!

Just checking.... :-)
Well done!!

payal agarwal said...

very rhythmic..:)

Sadie Tagabayan said...

They do say the way to a man's heart is through his stomach.
My husband is actually a better cook than I am. We generally like to cook together when possible. I do the prep work. I enjoy slicing and mixing things. He likes to do the actual cooking. He's much more attentive than I am to stirring, flipping, basting. Together we make a pretty good meal!
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/10/octpowrimo-2014-day-2.html

Fifi Islaih said...

I really like this line: I too used to have a heart
To which i used to cling.

TO TOUCH THE HORIZON said...

Thank you payal

Amiya chatterjee said...


Through his stomach
I stole his heart

In exchange of mine
Now I can say 'I am fine'

Just like a fine romantic female poet
You stole his heart|
Your precious heart was in his hand . How wonderful.
Lovely poem Philo.

TO TOUCH THE HORIZON said...

Amiyada I owe it to you.. You know that.

TO TOUCH THE HORIZON said...

@sadie..I do the same. Even my husband is a better cook than I am

TO TOUCH THE HORIZON said...

Thanks Julie..I really liked the prompt.